 script my heart 2008-04-11 . chapter 1My favorite lines are these: "the symphony of their hearts resounding. hitting the highest notes, and denying the lower ones."
I wish more people would, like you said, dare to let words dance from their lips, instead of hiding away inside. It would make life much less confusing.
I like your use of a quote from Wickam. It sums up the mood of your poem. Wouldn't it be nice if every guy could quote poetry?
~smh |