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| Zonne 2008-04-19 ch 1, | abuseha! GREAT little story all the elements are there the range of emotions of the characters the goodness of the little boy his choice his suffering his reward great great great... I like the story, the writing, and even the length is just right. I like all of it Zonne the review marathon profile in my bio page |
| Annihilate.My.Mind 2008-04-04 ch 1, | abuseAww! That's so sweet and cute! Very nice detail without it being overwhelming! |
| person 2008-04-04 ch 1, anon. | abuseStrange and kind of cool! You have a talent writing about kids. |