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Reviews For: The God With One Slipper

Zonne
2008-04-19
ch 1,
abuseha! GREAT little story

all the elements are there
the range of emotions of the characters
the goodness of the little boy
his choice
his suffering
his reward

great great great...

I like the story, the writing, and even the length is just right.
I like all of it

Zonne
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Annihilate.My.Mind
2008-04-04
ch 1,
abuseAww! That's so sweet and cute! Very nice detail without it being overwhelming!
person
2008-04-04
ch 1, anon.
abuseStrange and kind of cool! You have a talent writing about kids.
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