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| nariko-kaida 2008-04-04 ch 1,  | abuseAmazing! |
| Rynx-too-genki 2008-04-04 ch 1, | abuseThe poem is is a little confusing to be honest. It isn't a very smooth read and feels a little incomplete. Perhaps you could expand on it? (You should change your summary too. ^^) |