Reviews for Love By Numbers - FictionPress.com

Rhapsody in Red 2008-04-15 ch 2,	abuseThat ended nearly killed me. I almost cried, and to have the power to do that with your writing makes you a very good writer. the only thing i would suggest is that you look over your work for grammar errors. I know that i have little right to tell you that because i am the queen of grammar and spelling mistakes, but i'm working on it too. Loved the story a ton! Keep writing!
MelAsh 2008-04-04 ch 2,	abuseI like the storyline, but you seem to go a tad fast. They were together and happy then... not together. I love the characters already but maybe you could slow up the intro or give more of a back story before he leaves her, but then again what you're doing may be the aim of your story, but I do like it very very much ^^ And the description is perfect. I can picture it ^^ Keep writing!