Beautiful beautiful beautiful

the ending was so dramatic. *dreamy sigh* i love dramatic.

I'm glad he got up off his ass and went back to her. .

SO FREAKIN' ORIGINAL!

GREAT WORK!

It was sweet... although the guy was utterly stupid! *rollseyes*

Go Ally! ;)

I love it...

An absolutely adorable read :)) it was so sweet the only thing I can say is... I loved it!

Awwr! I like how you got this plot into the male perspective, because we mostly see stories like these told in the female's POV. (:

Simply amazing

I thought it was WONDERFUL. I liked Joey because he was real, and I can relate to him, actually.

Ally was definitely a big one.

The humor was awesome. Poo is appropriate for Kevin, the jerk. lol.

Good story, it really got to me.

This was such an excellent story! I love it!

very nice...i like this story

Ahmigawd, that was awesome!

I can actually relate, sort of. I'm my best guy friend's substitute too, except...well, he's still crushing, still blind to my presence, and still being an idiot. That and I haven't had my happy ending yet. Suffice to say, my life is still stuck somewhere in the middle of the story.

Haha, anyway, keep writing! I'm your avid supporter, still rooting for you.

dark jam.

really cute! :D

i've been reading quite a few of your oneshots and LOVE some and like the others.

but i have a problem with this one (not the writing but the plot). so he's been the subtitute the whole time and he thinks it's okay to treat aly like a subtitute?

because if i was her, that's what i'd be thinking.