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Reviews For: Crooked Confessions

I just Want To Be AMY
2008-05-24
ch 1,
abuseThis story rox

a gay guy iz tha father of a teen girl's bbi

that iz actually different, the story I am workin on most wouldn't call unique, bt the girl is nd the guy iz

lolz

nothing to criticise so am gonna shut up now

lolz

-- Zinaalla xoxo
CherishedSong
2008-04-04
ch 1,
abuseI've seen the subject of teen pregnancy quite a few times in stories, but I'm really interested in this one because of Lucas' doubt not only because he was a father, but also because he was gay.

Yeah, it was short, so I'm hoping that the next chapter would be longer.

Didn't find any noticeable spelling and grammar errors, so I think it's fine.

Continue writing, and I'll keep on reading. You got me interested. =)
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