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| bavand 2008-05-28 ch 1,  | abuseWow... you have really mastered how to pack so much imagery and emotion in just a few lines! I love the juxtaposition of sparks/fireworks being hot and then the cold. |
| Lurid Black 2008-04-23 ch 1, anon. | abuseBeautiful haiku Nemo! Keep writing! |
| simpleplan13 2008-04-05 ch 1, | abusethe whole cold fireworks thing is really great. It's such a unique image. Really awesome peiece. |
| Katrina Zeffirelli 2008-04-04 ch 1, | abuseLOVE THIS! keep it up! =) |