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| Lurid Black 2008-04-23 ch 1, anon. | abuseHm, should it be 'written' instead of 'wrote'? Not really sure, I guess they both sound right, but anyways it was simply beautiful, write on! ~Lurid~ |
| simpleplan13 2008-04-05 ch 1,  | abuseThis is sweet and the whole wanting them to find it because you cant show them is nice. The only thing is I've wrote is grammatically wrong. It's I've written. Since a haiku is typically 5-7-5, you could make the middle line Every poem I have written. Just an idea. |
| Katrina Zeffirelli 2008-04-04 ch 1, | abusei wish that too! *sigh* great job, as always! =) |