been there, done that. good job

o i really liked it. it was extremley well done:)

Nice idea. (: I especially like the last line of it - 'the inferno's fine'.

The rhyme was nice overall, though I thought it sounded a little forced at times. 'Rolling through the dew', for instance, seemed odd following the fact that the dice rolled down the alley. It seems odd to have grass in an alley. =X

Overall, though, great job!