You've created a very cute little story here, I found myself easily picturing the scene in my head. One thing I will say though (and it really is just me nit-picking)is that I picked up on a typo in this sentence:

A knock on the closet door viciously ripper her from the intense dramatic scene she was typing.

I think that ripper is supposed to be ripped but it really is only a minor mistake and certainly the only one that I picked up on. You are a wonderful author and I can't understand why you've so few reviews.

Keep up the great work!
Bella