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| Erma Buckles 2008-05-12 ch 1,  | abuseThis is so cute! I wrote a very similar poem, even using some of the same comparisons (cottonballs) recently, but I haven't posted it. I think you very nicely express the feeling of having a cold. A feeling thats just: bleaach... Its very interesting how people take something as unfun and ordinary as having a cold and write poetry about it. |