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| fatbird33 2008-05-10 ch 1, | abusesuper good. i like the style and how at the end you had one word per stanza, that really worked well. |
| RockerDutchess 2008-04-15 ch 1, | abuseI like this poem because i can relate sometimes it seems like the devil is standing behind u in any situation were you are being tewmpted |
| Julius Gillian 2008-04-05 ch 1, | abuseI wonder what is facing the author that he or she finds so devastating that he or she will instantly lose their faith if they acknowledge this. I like how you state your problem in the first sentence, it was very metaphorical and heart renching. The rest is pretty self-explanatory, and I liked how you chopped the last sentence into bits to add an emphasis. |