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Reviews For: Devil Stand Behind Me

fatbird33
2008-05-10
ch 1,
abusesuper good. i like the style and how at the end you had one word per stanza, that really worked well.
RockerDutchess
2008-04-15
ch 1,
abuseI like this poem because i can relate sometimes it seems like the devil is standing behind u in any situation were you are being tewmpted
Julius Gillian
2008-04-05
ch 1,
abuseI wonder what is facing the author that he or she finds so devastating that he or she will instantly lose their faith if they acknowledge this.

I like how you state your problem in the first sentence, it was very metaphorical and heart renching. The rest is pretty self-explanatory, and I liked how you chopped the last sentence into bits to add an emphasis.
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