and sometimes you dont even realise you've eaten too much until a few hours later after you've eaten even more xD

heheheh, look at our pennames! you're like notme.

This was a cute poem :) it was a bit repetitive, but I feel like that sort of added flow to it. I feel like ending each sentence in a punctuation mark keeps it a bit stilted, however.

Fun poem, made me smile. Short and sweet that's the way a poem should be!