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| Memoirs of a Demon Angel 2008-04-08 ch 1, | abuseWow this one's really good too! Depressing, yes, but good :) Just don't flip out on us okay? We all do care for you :) |
| Nirvanic Panic 2008-04-05 ch 1, | abuseas amazing as cheese - the ending really got me keep it up |
| J.O.Cooper 2008-04-04 ch 1, | abuseWhere are the commas in this piece of writing? Poems usually have commas, right? But, anyways, it's really good. I see something in it, but I don't know exactly what it is. That's a compliment by the way. |