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| openheadspace 2008-05-05 ch 9,  | abuseHahahahaha, "I come in peace." That line was awesome. Other notes, that girl was beyond creepy, her being able to get into Ordin's thoughts was cool to read, and I hope you update speedy speedy! gg |
| NeverEndingNights 2008-05-04 ch 9, | abuseSomeone said these were too short? It's nice for me. I always have like barely any time to read stuff. Anywho. This is good! Update soon! Love Sheen |
| NeverEndingNights 2008-04-29 ch 8, | abuseGreat new chapter. Sorry it took me so long. It's been a long week. Love Sheen |
| openheadspace 2008-04-27 ch 8, | abuseI AM AMAZING! Ahem. Moving on. Wow, it was short. I like that the water brings her back and the description you made of her with the water in the lungs etc etc was well written. GOOD JOB! Hope this coming week isn't so hectic! :) |
| NeverEndingNights 2008-04-20 ch 7, | abuseI really like this story! It's very interesting. Can't wait for more. Love Sheen |
| openheadspace 2008-04-20 ch 7, | abuseCheers to knew characters! And more capturing...wonder who it is this time...hm??Hm? HM?! |
| openheadspace 2008-04-14 ch 6, | abuseWoot for Gaiden and Savannah! This is finally taking a beautiful turn for the exciting! Update soon! :) |
| NeverEndingNights 2008-04-14 ch 6, | abuseI really like this story. It's kind of like Inkheart. . . Only it's not. Hehe ^_^ Love Sheen |
| NeverEndingNights 2008-04-11 ch 5, | abuseGreat new part. . . Curious to see what this other world is like. XP Love Sheen |
| openheadspace 2008-04-10 ch 5, | abuseNO! It's too short. BOO! But even it's shortnes, it was great. :) Post the next one soon, or I will surely explode! |
| NeverEndingNights 2008-04-09 ch 4, | abuseNice. Her friends sound very. . . interesting. hehe. Kind of like a nicer, more emotion showing, version of mine! ^_^ Love Sheen |
| MONOKUROOMU TORABURU 2008-04-09 ch 1, | abuseI really enjoyed reading this. It was a bit different from what I usually read but you made it interesting! |
| openheadspace 2008-04-08 ch 4, | abuseOh, man. I was going to pause before I read this chapter and get something to eat, but I made the mistake of reading the first line and I got sucked in faster than...than...I can't even figure out a good metaphor I'm so excited for the next one! Yay! Keep up the fabulous work! |
| NeverEndingNights 2008-04-07 ch 3, | abuseGreat new chapter, my dear! Cannot wait for more! Love Sheen |
| openheadspace 2008-04-07 ch 3, | abuseI like the idea of her grandparents. I hope they are able to do something b/c she really needs a mentor of sorts. I can't believe she's dayslipping! Oh man, this should be good! Hope you update soon. :) |