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| BoReD tO dEaTh 2008-05-03 ch 7,  | abuseIt is really good. It does remind me of Twilight by Stephenie Meyer but I love it anyways. I hope you keep writing |
| Vampire0175 2008-04-30 ch 7, | abuseLoved the story. I hope you wright more stories some time in the future I will definitely read them. -Raven |
| meus carus 2008-04-28 ch 4, | abuseI have to admit, when I first started reading this story I didn't think it would be very good but it made a turn around and is actually turning out well! Can't wait for another update ;) |
| BoReD tO dEaTh 2008-04-26 ch 3, | abusei love your story and i hope you keep writing it |
| BoReD tO dEaTh 2008-04-13 ch 2, | abuseit was good. it is fast pased but that can be good. and i like how it was her first kiss. |
| Feathers-in-the-Wind 2008-04-06 ch 1, | abuseI like it so far. The only thing I'm unsure about is the constant shift of tenses. It starts with past tense, and continues to shift through the story. You should stick to one, just for consistancy. But other than that, it's wonderful. Can't wait to see more of it! |
| BoReD tO dEaTh 2008-04-05 ch 1, | abuseI like your plot. It is a little fast pased but that is okay. I hope you keep writing! |