Reviews for While Buying Swimmsuit

hollagurl8 2008-06-04 ch 1,	abuseAww, thats so sweet!! :]
queen-of-armbands 2008-04-24 ch 1,	abuseplot twist!! i
Hashena 2008-04-06 ch 1,	abuseI think that you could have told that story in a couple of chapters and some grammar issues but other than that it's GREAT ^.^
Katherine-the-greate 2008-04-05 ch 1,	abusepretty sweet short story. the characters seem to work very well together. Ps--the beginning with her mother and the bad day rant was not needed. and You might want to get a beta to edit this. I ran across a lot of errors, especially near the end.