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| fairytale failure 2008-04-06 ch 1,  | abuseReminds me of oranges and cream icecream...I love the last few lines. They are brilliant. The only thing I think doesn't work in this poem is the title - I know that you mean it is the contrast between selfless and selfish, but it doesn't feel like yinyang to me. |