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Reviews For: Dreams fly on the shadows of her Failures

silverman
2008-06-16
ch 2,
abuseWow. It is exceedingly difficult to put my feelings into words and if that is the intention you have pulled it off remarkably well.

This is painfully well written, so detailed and explicit that you become emersed in the description, despite it being short and it brings me to wonder how you were able to write something like this..

Well done but i am speechless
In.the.Wardrobe
2008-05-04
ch 2,
abusethis...makes me confused and sad and angry. i just...i dont' know. it's great, how you wrote it, but...

wow. it's powerful. messed up, but powerful...the first lines...gosh, dude, that;s nuts. and the mention of the sewing kit, its confusing, but...

wow.
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