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Past Prototype 2009-04-30 . chapter 1
...You're very good at these angsty poems aren't you?
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I really liked this one though...something similar to this happened at my school recently...the girl lived though, and she moved to a new town and school.
It's sad that things like this happen all the time yet no one seems to bat an eyelash...
they call me Merrit 2008-04-12 . chapter 1
It almost made me cry..it is well done. Very emotional piece.
MissDedodakes 2008-04-12 . chapter 1
Won’t no one save her?

Won’t some one come and say “stop! Stop before it’s too late!”?

Almost terrifying... poor girl... and so true, great writing.
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