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The Datura Rose 2008-09-23 ch 6,	abuseYay a new chapter! This one is great ^.^. I actually quite like the way Dom has turned out. You make Cole and Lexi's situation very real, and that's what makes the story great!! As ever, Lexi is AWESOME. I, too, am a tomboy and really the only girly-ish thing I do is grow out my nails mwa hahaha >:). I can't wait for more chapters!! (Give me a few days and I'll have ideas for you, lol) ~Sophia
Silken Silver Berries 2008-09-20 ch 6, anon.	abusewow.. this chapter was really good. i know you said you didn't really like it, but i did. i'm kind of.. glad that dom saw her that way and was able to be there for her. i liked the interaction between cole and lexi, you can see he's really troubled about what happened. i hope they get things figured out. i'm starting to like dom more! i loved what he said right after cole and lexi talked, made him seem to much more human lol. good work, i can't wait for the next chapter!
blueangel916 2008-09-20 ch 6,	abuseLOL Lex always makes me laugh, great chapter :D hm ideas...so maybe do the emotional card sort of thing where Cole ignores her and she get deptessed while dom tries to help her and even the 'hated' friends take notice but cole is completely oblivious unitl something major happens...i dunno just a thought it might me too cliche though anywho can't wait to see what you ahve in store for us next
itsadangerouslove 2008-09-20 ch 6,	abuseI started reading your story when i was supposed to be getting ready to go out with my parents. i thought "ill just read a chapter" LOL. that didnt happen, i got hooked :P I cant wait for the next part!
StarsWatchAsIDance 2008-09-20 ch 6,	abuseThis was an awesome chapter! Dom really isn't that bad, is he? And why won't Cole talk to her? That makes me sad...maybe you should make the next chapter something different. Like Lexi running into a girl she hadn't talked to for years, and then that girl tells her something about Dominic, or Cole, that she didn't know. That would be cool. Anyway, good luck with the wedding, and update soon! :)
WriterGurl123 2008-09-20 ch 6,	abuseI love this story, and it sucks that Cole would just throw away their entire friendship over a kiss, granted they both felt something, but they've been friends since forever. I'm glad that Lexi has someone to hang out, and I have a feeling that she might even start liking Dom, which might cause some problems later on with Cole.
Linece 2008-09-13 ch 5,	abuseNew reader here! wave Awesome story. I love Lex, she's funny, sarcastic and so loveable... And yep, I say change is in the air, too. I think Cole will be... distant, I think. I'm not sure but I believe that he has feelings for her but he's too scared to... well, hurt her. I hope you will update soon. PS: Yeah,"Wanted" was awesome and James McAvoy is a total stud. =P
blueangel916 2008-09-12 ch 5,	abuseI'm back from class and finished this chapter...it was great...the heat is turning up wo...can't wait to read more :D
blueangel916 2008-09-12 ch 4,	abuseO i love ur story and what you have done with your characters :D i'll finish when i get home from class but until then i can't wait and i hope you add some more chapters up :D
Silken Silver Berries 2008-09-08 ch 5, anon.	abuseso... i did not expect anything like that to happen that soon between lex and cole. i mean, i guess you're not planning on making a novel out of this or anything, i just didn't expect it that soon. i thought maybe we would see more of lex and dom or, rather, more of him chasing her, before we saw anything happen between cole and lexie. i love lex. i absolutely love her, she's one of my favourite characters ever. i'm kind of jealous of the fact that she has a cole and i don't lol. hope the next chapter is up soon, can't wait! good work on this one!
The Datura Rose 2008-09-04 ch 5,	abuseO.O. AAH! I don't know who I want Lexi to end up with!! Anyway, AWESOME chapter, even better than the last one! One thing that's good: your plot has many very good twists in it, because there's a type of story this would catagorize under, and that's: girl main character, best looking guy in school fall in love. I've read it a million times. But you're story is going differently! YAY! POST MORE SOON!! PLEASE!
The Datura Rose 2008-09-04 ch 4,	abuseYes, you're aloud to slap me for not reviewing eariler! I'm sorry about that -_-', I have to share the comp with four other people T.T. Anyway, I LOVED this chapter! Nice descriptions, the guys had just enough arrogance. I totally like Cole better. Seriously,he's my fav character :D!
PickensPeach 2008-08-31 ch 5,	abuseI like this story and this chapter. I'm glad you went ahead and did something with Cole and Alexis.
StarsWatchAsIDance 2008-08-31 ch 5,	abuseI liked that chapter! So does Cole like her? Or no? Or was that just a drunken adventure? Anyway, this was a well written chapter, and I hope you continue to update soon! :)
StarsWatchAsIDance 2008-08-31 ch 4,	abuseOh...Nicholas is Cole...I kind of forgot that minor detail. Dom has an awesome personality...I love him! The only complaint I have is that you change scenes a lot, but you don't transition. I may have to read something twice to really understand it. But otherwise, keep up the great work! :)

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