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| VegasGoddess 2008-04-07 ch 1,  | abuseJazzy, this was SO good!! It made me cry happy tears, and made me really really miss you!! But it was absolutely BEAUTIFUL!! FANTASTIC, fantastic job. I am so proud of you, like you wouldn't believe!! All my love and then some, ~Wild Irish Roses~ |
| simpleplan13 2008-04-06 ch 1, | abuseI like it. The first stanza is especially powerful. I know LYLAS is the title, but that was my least favorite part. I just felt like that wasn't really a reason people cant tear you apart since ppl tear siblings apart... if that makes sense. I just think the other ways you describe your bond are better. Other than that I liked it a lot |
| Andrea Lotte 2008-04-06 ch 1, | abuseThat's really cute :) |