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| Andrea Lotte 2008-04-07 ch 1, | abuseThe rhyming scheme is a bit irregular but I suppose that is intentional? A bit like a song as well, though I'm not complaining! I like the beginning (the first four lines) but after that it gets a teensy bit cliched. But other than that, good job! |
| Silent Warrior 2008-04-06 ch 1, | abusehey, thanks for the review! This is amazing, so beautiful! It kind of reminds me of Maximum Ride (a book series about kids with wings, you should check it out). |