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Reviews For: Holding Captive Her Tears

Andrea Lotte
2008-04-07
ch 1,
abuseThe rhyming scheme is a bit irregular but I suppose that is intentional? A bit like a song as well, though I'm not complaining! I like the beginning (the first four lines) but after that it gets a teensy bit cliched. But other than that, good job!
Silent Warrior
2008-04-06
ch 1,
abusehey, thanks for the review! This is amazing, so beautiful! It kind of reminds me of Maximum Ride (a book series about kids with wings, you should check it out).
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