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| Shasta Valentine 2008-04-06 ch 1, | abusesecond? are you kidding me? this poem is BRILLIANCE. i LOVE it. and believe me, i never say that about religion poems becuase well, people who don't really have strong religion don't have strong emotion needed for that kind of poetry. not only did i relate to it becuase i too am a christian and went through a similar situation like you, but i love the triple ryhme format. you rock, and so does you poetry. and you should have won first. nuff said. --sv |