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Reviews For: The Actor's Lament

Shasta Valentine
2008-04-06
ch 1,
abusesecond?
are you kidding me?
this poem is BRILLIANCE.
i LOVE it. and believe me, i never say that about religion poems becuase well, people who don't really have strong religion don't have strong emotion needed for that kind of poetry.
not only did i relate to it becuase i too am a christian and went through a similar situation like you, but i love the triple ryhme format.
you rock, and so does you poetry.
and you should have won first.
nuff said.



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