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Narq 2009-10-01 . chapter 1
This is very powerful, you talk about doctors abusing their power I guess, and it is true. Some doctors do do that and get away with it.

I like the way you almost tell a story.

Something you could improve on is the formatting. Try having stanzas. If you have shift-enter you get single lines; only enter and you get double lines. Try it!!

Narq.
destinee's notebook 2008-05-28 . chapter 1
I guess when your body's been tied down, the only way you can live free is inside yourself.
Thermite 2008-04-12 . chapter 1
Hmm...makes one wonder who is the more sick, the doctor or the patient? I suppose people will always feel as though they have the right to decide the fates of others...Great poem; whether you purposefully outlined a major folly in human nature or not, this definitely made me take a moment and reflect on society as a whole. Excellent!

No worries,
Thermite
Rach.Liefde 2008-04-10 . chapter 1
Very strange.
vivid... and yet well written.
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