Reviews for landlocked liplock

Tytherpol 2008-05-18 ch 1,	abuseooh amazing. i don't know how you make rhyming look good but you do here :D i would omit the last stanza beautiful piece.
alicer 2008-04-05 ch 1,	abuseoh this is really really really good and i am actually looking forward to rereading it! all the rhyming things were REALLY well done until the last one. idk "in the sweet sad past glory" just seems like words put together in order to come up with something that rhymes with story. anyway yeah i like it though.