You might have intended this to be bad, but it was still good. I'm planning on reading it over a few more times just because it is so good.

Well, if your intention is to parody shitty pretentious emo poetry on MySpace, you failed - at least, in that you seem to know the meaning of every word you used. But the use of a vertically written word almost makes up for not working existentialism into it somehow. ;)

Amazing. Truly insiring. I think I'm going to print out a copy of it and hang it on my wall, where I can see it every day. It will inspire me to greatness. No, seriously. It's just...wow.

This poem sucked. It bombed with the power of Hiroshima and Nagasaki combined.

A lovely poem. I'll have to say that it's very inspiring...

its so deep and emotional i feel like the words are speaking to me...

Wow... it was like... So deep, man. Like, wow. I wish I could write poetry that meaningful. It touched my very soul.

-shiftyeyes-

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I didn't put that link there, did you?

-shiftyeyes-

lol...ok...well um...ur right it IS very artsy.

i like it though.

nice job.

yours until the wind changes,

gg

Yeah this was really artsy, but I think you just wanted to use "lugubrious". And not only that, but also use it as an alliteration. Haha thanks for your poem. Keep writing :)