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| Lady-CheshireXIII 2008-04-12 ch 1,   | oh lovely! |
| Jon Blue 2008-04-11 ch 1, | hmm...shouldn't that say "That was always there"? i mean like this I don't really get it...the shattered mirror shows a reflection that has never been there? |
| lost for words 2008-04-05 ch 1, | i like the confusing and dark quality to the last line. nice haiku. |