Nope, I did not see that Bobby-Jaime thing coming.. but I like surprises and I hope you'll elaborate their "story" in the next chapter - I'm a sucker for romance.. well, sometimes.. would be interesting to see some man on man relations, too mwehe.. nah, just kidding

ah, short review, but just wanted to drop by and say you did a good job on the chapter.. don't think you're capable of doing a bad one now I think about it :)

Booyakasha!

Aaw, no zombies, you say? Nah, I can live without 'em - you'll probably come up with something just as good.. looking forward to find out what!
this chapter is just awesome, the descriptions, the conversations between all the characters.. I'm no expert in writing and such, but it's really good :)

..and the last part the gurney-man was just "wow".. You could fool me, alright.. what are you? are closet-doctor?

well, keep it up :)

This chapter was fantastic... I'm completely hooked on this, want to see where it goes

On a side note, being about to take an SAT test in the subject, the Bio details are awesome.
Not much more to say, keep up the good work

Hey you!

'just came by, and this story suddenly caught my attention. I hope you're going to continue this, I'm hooked right now - I wanna know what's going on at that hospital..
I sense a little Resident Evil over this, but that's only a compliment :)

Well, I don't have any critique, cause overall I just liked what I read and I look forward to see where this is going, so continue this, pretty please? :)

Wow...
very nice, very nice

I love how the regular-day details are so well meshed with the gruesome details of the disease- very well done. Can't wait for the next chapter, keep writing