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| CanKitten 2008-05-11 ch 2,  | abuseHey you! 'just came by, and this story suddenly caught my attention. I hope you're going to continue this, I'm hooked right now - I wanna know what's going on at that hospital.. I sense a little Resident Evil over this, but that's only a compliment :) Well, I don't have any critique, cause overall I just liked what I read and I look forward to see where this is going, so continue this, pretty please? :) |
| InBedWithSoviets 2008-05-08 ch 2, | abuseWow... very nice, very nice I love how the regular-day details are so well meshed with the gruesome details of the disease- very well done. Can't wait for the next chapter, keep writing |