Reviews for cotton tailed blue bunnies and i

english summer rain 2008-07-06 ch 1,	abusehaha sweet. concept is awesome. should it be 'hand in hand' not 'hand and hand'? not so sure about that. line breaks didn't ruin the flow, overall well written. i liked it :D
simpleplan13 2008-04-06 ch 1,	abuseI love the first line... the whole perfect/imperfection thing was a nice play on words. I also like the ending... it basically answer the question readers (well me anyway) were asking themselves when reading the piece. The only thing is the punctuation just seemed a bit off. I dunno. The second sentence seemed a bit of a runon, plus starting it with overrun just sounded a bit awkward to me. Almost like it's a command as opposed to what youre doing. Still it's an interesting piece. Nice job!
perpetual questions 2008-04-06 ch 1,	abusei love the vivid surreality. and the idea is so humourous and simultaneously compelling... wonderful.