 IdeasInTheAir 2008-08-03 . chapter 1I loved the ending of this, the part about being perfectly sane. One thing, I think "hand and hand" is suposed to be "hand in hand" but I had to read it twice before I saw that, and it doesn't really make a difference. Actually, it kind of adds to it, in a way.
Great job!
Danielle=) |