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smurf-love 2009-09-23 . chapter 10
haha i hope she give him a black eye...before they start to do anything...lol

that would be so cool,

kick ** story so far..

~smurf~
Summer Shadow 2009-03-06 . chapter 10
Wow! Awesome story! :D Update really soon! Will is awesome! And Im getting confused with Emerson! Yah, Josh and Adrienne! They seem cute thoughter! :P Great story! :D Update! :D
hollywoodstar95 2009-03-03 . chapter 10
IM REVIEWING!
i miss reading your stories!
well do well in school! haha
this chapter is funny. :)
pinkeclipse 2009-02-28 . chapter 10
i dont think friendship is on his mind...
flamesflyer 2009-02-27 . chapter 1
ohh and forgot to mention that I LOVE the one pic you have for Ravia. I think you should keep Hayley Williams as her just because of her TWLOHA shirt.
flamesflyer 2009-02-27 . chapter 10
Don't worry about the long period between the updates. I know all about the senior year cram/ struggle. I basically decided to mentally kill myself for my final semester of senior year, Chem, Calc, History: West and the World, Photography, swimming, throwing and work. not fun. I'd like to say that there is less work in uni, but there isn't. It just seems like less 'cause it's all spread out, until you get to exam time.
ANYway... I really like your story. I think it's really cute. I know it seems really cliche and would never happen in real life the whole hating the person, but really liking them, or the thinking that they are total jerks, but you really like them. Oh it does happen in real life.
I really like how your characters are believable. I can pick out a friend of mine for each character.

Please write more as soon as you can.
Good luck with the acceptances!
Oh and why do you get your acceptance so late? By this time last year my friends and i already got our acceptance letter, except the uni my friend applied to in the states, they came later. Do you have a different application system?
MidnightThief15 2009-02-26 . chapter 10
I loved the argument. Lol. I didn't really get why Emerson called her a Butterfly, but that was part of why it was so funny, that and she responded to it as if it WERE an insult. Lol. It was funny.
BluHelixx 2009-02-26 . chapter 10
OMG it's been SO LONG!! I'm glad you updated!

Well, it's was an awesome chapter, I'm so glad you put it up. This is one of my favorite stories!! :D Post again soon! :D
JadeDream 2009-02-26 . chapter 10
who! lol update soon! and i totally understand senioritis...i didnt do anything my senior year haha. well cant wait to read the next chapter!
Black Viper 2009-02-25 . chapter 10
cool chapter.
Salyl 2009-02-25 . chapter 10
Finally! New chapter :] I LOVE THE HUSH SOUND! :]

haha anyways, yeah it's good. :]
UPDATE SOON

-Sally
MidnightThief15 2009-02-14 . chapter 9
O. I love Iris by the Goo Goo Dolls! ^_^
MidnightThief15 2009-02-14 . chapter 2
I hate her sister, she's such an annoying B*.
Gris bray 2008-11-23 . chapter 9
AW! is it me or am i falling in love with all ur stories!
ur super f-ing awesome~
contiue to rock on and PLS update soon!
WriterGurl123 2008-11-17 . chapter 9
I thought it was adorably cute. I can see that they're going to have a nice relationship in the future. =D
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