 captain skippy529 2009-11-29 . chapter 16Omg best freaking story ever! Please keep updating this is pure magic!! I love it! |
 leigh-rohan 2009-11-28 . chapter 1So I hope you don't mind, I know that your last update was all the way at chapter 15, but this is my first update of yours that I've seen, so I'll be starting from the beginning with reviews :)
Well, I must say that your summary was very intriguing, and I want to state that I very much believe in second chances because I know that people can change. Also, I like your pen name, very cool.
Anyway, it is a very good prologue. It kept me well interested, gave great description, while leaving me with a lot of questions, the very purpose of a prologue :)
I am really excited to read on (plus I have the benefit of getting a lot of it at once), and I think that you have a great story set up for you, it's not a bland subject so very cool. |
 vio923 2009-09-09 . chapter 16I wish that you had continued writing this to its conclusion. |
 BoyNextDoor 2009-07-31 . chapter 16Lov this story
can wait 4 them to get together plz update soon
:) Awits soo romantic Lol |
 v3point7 2009-01-04 . chapter 15 I like it, its very interesting. At first I was expecting Kara to be cheating on him, which would have been cliche but you proved that wrong and it kept it interesting. Then when she met with Jason, which I think was foolish but I understand her rational, I didn't know what to expect and I was skeptical at his proposition until I read about him bringing out the coatroom picture, that really got me hooked. The only thing I'm still skeptical about is why he had a camera in there? Very weird, he's a creepy guy.. Can't wait for more! [; I love it. |
 notwithoutyou 2009-01-04 . chapter 15Oh my gosh! Jason is a total psycho. I really do hope that Ryan and Alyssa end up together somehow. Kara's really nice but not the right person, even though he loves her. Okay, this is going to get seriously complicated haha. Can't wait for the next update :) |
 v3point7 2008-12-30 . chapter 14awe, I really liked the ending. I can't wait to see how Kara's homecoming goes! And what Jason is up to! Update soon! |
 anna 2008-12-27 . chapter 14 please update this story bc i really like it! |
 noreen 2008-12-22 . chapter 14 i love it... |
 noreen 2008-12-11 . chapter 13 i love alyssa and ryan..
hope you wil update SOON. |
 Ritiki 2008-12-01 . chapter 13 Please update!! I LOVE this story!! |
 Amorous. 2008-11-29 . chapter 13Oh goodness, you definitely need to finish this story ASAP. Love it so far. |
 Lady R 2008-11-10 . chapter 13Ok, Ryan is confusing me, but I think that's the point, right? And I hope Kara is not cheating on him, although it appears that she just might be. I mean I like Ryan and Alyssa together, but Kara cheating on Ryan is just awful. But, I guess it would make Ryan leaving Kara easier if she was. I would prefer that Ryan and Alyssa re-establish their friendship first before anything else happen. Update soon. |
 v3point7 2008-11-09 . chapter 13 I love it! This was a great chapter. You did a wonderful job witht he dialogue and descriptions. I think Kara is cheating on him, though, after that one phone call he had with her. And poor Alyssa. She should tell someone about Jason. Can't wait for more! |
 bananamilkshake 2008-11-09 . chapter 13read it all in a go!
really nice and well paced! :) |