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| Amazingchi 2008-08-23 ch 9,  | abuseWow, this kind of story really isn't what I'd read normally. Somehow, you have me enticed! I only found by searching for other superhuman stories, and I must say I found a wonderful story here! *Adds story to faves and alert* -Amazingchi. P.S. Knowing me there will be some kind of reference or something that will crop up in my superhuman tale!, |
| LeticiaTokioHotel 2008-08-21 ch 9, | abuseYay! Great chapter. I love it. Update soon!! |
| righthere431 2008-08-20 ch 9, | abuseryan is so sweet =] i hope that jamie can control her powers now |
| Jevanminx 2008-08-20 ch 9, | abuseAw wow, shes starting to control them and everything, it'll be interesting to learn about the other things she can do. JM |
| lips.of.an.angel 2008-08-20 ch 9, | abuseaw...this is so sweet. i hope the practice works for Jamie. she really needs control over her powers. by every chapter i like Ryan more and more. he's adorable. good work! update soon! |
| SoulSam 2008-08-19 ch 9, | abusei am so excited she's trying gain control of her powers. that means ryan and jamie can get together soon hopefully! i could seriously spread ryan on a cracker...i love him. :) and i love everything you write, keep the amazing updates coming |
| TaurusGirl7 2008-08-19 ch 9, | abusei'm liking this ryan character more and more! update soon :D |
| Im. the. Angel. of. Darknes... 2008-08-19 ch 9, | abusehaha i love this story! |
| Westley 2008-08-19 ch 9, | abuseI really love all the qualities that you've written in this story! I just completely love it. Ryan is such a sweetie. What’s funny is that I know a real Jamie Baker. Maybe I should ask her if she has superpowers… ;) |
| xbrunnettex0 2008-08-19 ch 9, | abusehaha omgg i officially love ryan. he is so sweet! haha the light bulb thing made me laugh. |
| chic rebel 2008-08-19 ch 9, | abuseinteresting. the lightbulbs. and ryan is adorable. update soon please! |
| Luna Turner 2008-08-19 ch 9, | abuse*tear* How cute. ANOTHER AMAZING CHAPTER! =) Keep writing! I absolutely love this story. No critiques- except a few typos. =) But for once that doesn't bother me, because I love this story so much! And, your writing kinda reminds me of the Twilight Series. I don't know. It just does. Update soon! ~Luna Turner |
| songlawyer 2008-08-19 ch 9, | abuseI love the way this story is going and it makes me really happy that she's finally starting to open up to him after all this time. She's starting to trust in other besides her parents again, and that's just so much better than getting a golden necklace or something for her problems. Awesome job. |
| Seisaset 2008-08-19 ch 9, | abusesorry i havent been reviewing lately-away on vacation. i absolutely love the new progression of the story! please update soon :) |
| Sun Goddess 13 2008-08-19 ch 9, | abuseYes! I am so glad to see Jamie practicing with her powers. I can't wait to see what happens as she learns to gain control over them. This story is easily my favorite out there. Keep up the good work and I can't wait to read the next chapter. Don't make us wait to long! |