Reviews for infinity ends - FictionPress.com

fairytale failure 2008-04-06 ch 1,	abuseI feel like I can relate to this poem a lot, and you express the bitter feeling very well. your ideas about always and infinity were very original, and enjoyable to read, and I also liked the third stanza; the phrase 'taint these ties' really stood out to me.
generically beautiful 2008-04-06 ch 1,	abuseGreat first stanza - gives the poem a powerful intro and hooks the reader all at once. And that power continues throughout the entire poem. This is generically beautiful, btw. I changed my pen name. =) -Christine
simpleplan13 2008-04-06 ch 1,	abuseI like the alliteration in the third stanza. I also really like the ending because I can completely relate to it it. Nice piece.