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Reviews For: The Lack In My Reality

fatbird33
2008-05-04
ch 1,
abuseo this was insanely well done. bravos all around
jack-james
2008-04-07
ch 1,
abusea poem
about somebody
whom could it be
im sure you will tell me
even if not at current
the boy lurks now
with love in his heart
he's the symbol of the aryan race
georgie the smartlike
2008-04-06
ch 1, anon.
abusehey dude,
i read your poem... i like it and this is coming from someone whose favourite poems are the opal miner and the raven...
i thought i was abstract.. and i like abstract
anyhow i would love to know what it was inspired by, possibly who it was inspired by ... lol you dont have to tell me... but you can if you want... anyhow it was thought provoking, in the fact that i had to use my brain to understand what it meant ... which was wicked!
xx
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