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| boolinger 2008-07-16 ch 1, anon. | abuseI'm so confused...I loved the writing, I loved all the pictures you drew with the children and their smiles, yet I absolutely did not understand the ending. Is it her mom? If so where does she have to go? why has she always been there? why? what? huh? Yes, I sound stupid, but i promise you I'm usually smarter than this. I would love it if you could explain it to me; my email is - please please please tell me what the twist is because it sounds great. much love to you and thank you for writing this |
| d666lisa 2008-04-20 ch 1,  | abuseReally good story, I love the mini twist at the end :) |