Reviews for fighter's sacrifice

izeebella 2008-04-28 ch 1,	abuseI LOVE the last three stanzas. I understand that blue-black bruises is alliteration, but I would have loved a different, more unique image for bruises- I'm not sure, just my thought.
FellowMan 2008-04-07 ch 1,	abuseA tactile feast for the eyes, I really loved it, vivid
electric feel 2008-04-06 ch 1,	abusethis has beautiful imagery