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| Thaddeus Halstead 2008-04-06 ch 1,  | abuseHaha! Oh so cheeky; I love it! I loved how she just blew up on the air -- literally! Ha! The line "Rosalyn stood wild and defiant, tears bleeding from her eyes" could have been no better written. |