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| Le Meg 2008-04-06 ch 5,  | abuseThis was pretty sweet. It reminds me a lot of Battlestar and Firefly - very promising mixture you got going. The set up so far works. The information about the Federation, the Alliance, the Outliers and all of that is coming in at a good pace - not too fast and not too slow - and you've definitely got the lingo down. I'm looking forward to learning more about the different characters and seeing where this story goes! Kudos. ;] |