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katezilla235
2008-05-03
ch 2,
abusethat was so cool!
i watched interview with the vampire last night
and so i am in a very vampy mood

please update soon :)
SabrinaJ
2008-04-13
ch 2,
abuseNice start to your story! I really like where this is going and your description of the 'vampire world' is full of promise. Lillith sounds like a cool character - but I haven't gotten a full picture of how she feels in my head. She seems to be taking the whole vamp business with a pinch of salt! Update soon!

Sabrina
TheNarglesWillEatYou
2008-04-12
ch 2,
abuseher foster father named harry? does she have a sister named Deb? Perhaps a brother named Dexter. it's funny, your voice comes through on this. like, i can just see you writing or saying this. especially the threat part. oh, i told my mom never to watch Brokeback Mountain, and she totally believed me.
Feathers-in-the-Wind
2008-04-06
ch 1,
abuseVery interesting, and definitely action-packed. But I'm confused — why were they trying to kidnap her? For the sake of it? Or will you explain it later? Anyway, I love it so far. Can't wait to see more of it!
TheNarglesWillEatYou
2008-04-06
ch 1,
abusehi!! look at the email i sent you! it was really awkward! good story! obviously. are you done yet?
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