Wow. This is... it made me happy xD The last line is so very true. I don't know what to say... Except: YOU ROCK! :)

I didn't like the repetition of seems. Also aren't eels like deadly? Why would you want to be holding one? Maybe Im wrong about that though.

I like this piece it's very true. Minue eels maybe being dangerous I like that simile a lot and I also like your descriptions of happiness. And the ending is so great... simplicity is always awesome. Nicely done

Awesome! :) I truly enjoyed this piece. Great job. Write on!

Anna _