Reviews for Lunarstone: The moon stone cave

Rejected Destiny 2008-04-06 ch 1,	abuseJust a quick helping hand. In you Lunarstone story, chapter 1, on paragraph seven, you wrote "At this point he was going to turn into a pop-cicle" You might want to change pop-cicle to icicle. Pop-cicle is a dessert used today. I don't want to sound harsh or anything. Just trying to help.
Linwe Ann 2008-04-06 ch 1,	abusethis is really good so far! i think this story has good potential- good plot and characters. the only thing i think you need to do is go over the story with spelling check, because you had some technical (spelling and grammar) errors in there. don't let the technicalities hinder the flow of your story! :P keep it up!