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| shutitoff 2008-04-09 ch 1,  | abuseI love how you haven't used any punctuation to break up the flow, it's as if the whole poem is spoken in one breath. I also like how you describe this man as if he is apart from the the rest of the world. It makes you think. Which is good. Favourite, for sure. |
| East-0f-Eden 2008-04-06 ch 1, | abusefull of dispair and desperation. It paints an excellent picture of a homeless person. |