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| xLittleBlackConverse. 2008-04-13 ch 1,  | abusehahaha funny and totally unexpected!! not the typical kiss and make up story ut i loved it! didnt expect that ending but haha i loved it cheers! |
| Hope Lopart 2008-04-10 ch 1, | abuseHAHA! good job. ~Hope |
| RoseLife 2008-04-07 ch 1, | abuseHAHAHA and ew! nice work ^^ |
| jacksy 2008-04-07 ch 1, | abuseha, I really like this! Eww made out with his sister in his dream, not cool, haha. You write really well and this story flows nicely, the only thing I was confused about is the ages, because I'm guessing Julie still lives at home? Well that how it seemed. Update soon! |