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Reviews For: Some Things Never Change

xLittleBlackConverse.
2008-04-26
ch 2,
Your oneshots are the cutest things ever. And they make me smile all wide and pychotic =D
a bitter kiss.
2008-04-11
ch 1,
Oh, before I say anything, I just wanted to point out that all numbers from 0 - 100 should be spelled. So all the 2s you have, should be spelled out to 'two'. :) Don't worry, I used to do that until someone told me. :)

You're missing a lot of your punctuation in the dialogue though. :(

But other than those two, wonderful. I've always loved stories with best friends. :)
shadowwolf44
2008-04-08
ch 2,
Me again,I think part 2 was very good. I liked the ending.
Tecna
2008-04-08
ch 2,
That was a really sweet chapter, I really enjoyed the two-part fic, it's so well written and flows smoothly. I couldn't agree more with the ending line; seeing that I always think in change as that way, it's well put and I sincerely enjoyed reading it, it was brilliant story.
Tecna ;)
Debbycake
2008-04-08
ch 1,
Please put up more! That a cliff hanger! You can't end a story with a cliff hanger!
kitkat74
2008-04-06
ch 1,
OMG! I love this story beginning...you should post a second part. You could probably add a more than a second part. With a plot like this one and the cliff hanger anything can happen. Please keep on writing...and i'll keep on reading
shadowwolf44
2008-04-06
ch 1,
I liked it. Please update
Tecna
2008-04-06
ch 1,
I enjoyed reading it, I'm looking forward to the second part. This was a great chapter, really enjoyed it.
Tecna ;)
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