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| xLittleBlackConverse. 2008-04-26 ch 2, | Your oneshots are the cutest things ever. And they make me smile all wide and pychotic =D |
| a bitter kiss. 2008-04-11 ch 1, | Oh, before I say anything, I just wanted to point out that all numbers from 0 - 100 should be spelled. So all the 2s you have, should be spelled out to 'two'. :) Don't worry, I used to do that until someone told me. :) You're missing a lot of your punctuation in the dialogue though. :( But other than those two, wonderful. I've always loved stories with best friends. :) |
| shadowwolf44 2008-04-08 ch 2, | Me again,I think part 2 was very good. I liked the ending. |
| Tecna 2008-04-08 ch 2, | That was a really sweet chapter, I really enjoyed the two-part fic, it's so well written and flows smoothly. I couldn't agree more with the ending line; seeing that I always think in change as that way, it's well put and I sincerely enjoyed reading it, it was brilliant story. Tecna ;) |
| Debbycake 2008-04-08 ch 1, | Please put up more! That a cliff hanger! You can't end a story with a cliff hanger! |
| kitkat74 2008-04-06 ch 1, | OMG! I love this story beginning...you should post a second part. You could probably add a more than a second part. With a plot like this one and the cliff hanger anything can happen. Please keep on writing...and i'll keep on reading |
| shadowwolf44 2008-04-06 ch 1, | I liked it. Please update |
| Tecna 2008-04-06 ch 1, | I enjoyed reading it, I'm looking forward to the second part. This was a great chapter, really enjoyed it. Tecna ;) |