Hey, Nice story.

Kayla Brown.

XD Very cool. I like the plot; at least to me, it's incredibly original. ^_^ Please update soon!

;D I'm /already/ a StrellDerik fan. *sighs* Why must you torture me so early in the story? LOL

What's the girl's full name?

-dances.with.sunflowers.

jealous!! hehe. this is so cute. keep up the good work!

[Great. I was now going to be his next target if he decides to have a killing spree anytime soon.]

tee hee, for emos, itd be more like a crying spree...

[Unable to stand awkward turtles]

hehe.

[“Okay, it’s Derik.”]

lol, the spelling is weirding me out for some reason... hah. My friend dos it "derek", so... my bias.

uh oh... Dawn likes him mbe?

this is so sad! omg, frind break ups are worse than dating break ups :(

but cute premise. cant wait to read more.

Two thumbs up!

You made me like at least three times out loud. I was seriously comtemplating reading the chapter later, because I swear someone in my household is going to come and question me about my random outburst of laughter. Perhaps, the reason I find the story humorous is because I know that I too have done exactly what her friends are doing to her. It's just so easy and fun to torture your best friend.

yeah. you gotta update this more often.
Eh, this chapter was alright, I favor the first one though.
keep writing!! =)

Oh man. THis'll definitely be interesting. And Dawn. Gosh, I like where this is going. LONGER CHAPTERS PLEASE! =D

I love this story, I can't wait to see where it goes.
all though..Julie should die. ASAP :D

"Double you tee eff...?"
You can just put WTF. Seeing as that's how it's supposed to be read and all. ;)
Dawn, eh? Hmm...wonder what will happen!

ooh, so well written!
it's modern, yet not so cliche and young-adult-girly-bookish!
i can't wait to read more, i felt a relation to my life after reading this story, please continue!

where's the next chapter?! heheh so much potential! & i'm glad she picked a nice guy!

Well, this sounds interesting. :D

OMG, that was...just...AMAZING! DIDN'T KNOW YOU COULD WRITE LIKE THAT! Wow...0.0