 glimpses from an ivory tower 2008-09-04 . chapter 2Lauren, I love you for this.
The first paragraph (well, actually, everything) is brilliantly detailed because I can picture this scene, you stewing in that hotel room, all the better. More specifically, I can see the tirade forming in your mind that was never delivered, but I can imagine you saying it with hackles raised.
And to further cement your genius, I think I need to ask permission to put some of these phrases on a bumper sticker :) Specifically "acceptance isn't limited to california and massachusetts."
Overall, it's wonderful wonderful wonderful. If you clean up the language (well, in the last line anyway), would you mind submitting this, even if anonymously, to Echoes? |
 theinfinitebee 2008-09-04 . chapter 2I. LOVE. This. You don't know - well, actually, you probably do- how many times I've felt this way. Too many.
I love how you put "How dare you." alone. It's perfect.
I'm seriously tempted to tattoo the last line to my forehead. It's downright amazing.
Overall, I can really feel the emotion in this, and that's what I love best about it. Instant favourite. |