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| x0.maybe.x0 2008-07-29 ch 14, | abuseSo I suppose I could've just review replied, but that seems kind of impersonal to me... I figured I'd leave a review on my favorite chapter of this story instead... My favorite part of this story has to be the incorperation of music (and the fact that I like all of the music you've referenced in here doesn't hurt either). I'm having fun reading your stories. Yay! |
| x0.maybe.x0 2008-07-28 ch 16, | abuseSo I really love this story! It's very interesting. Can't wait for the next chapter! |
| WriterGurl123 2008-07-21 ch 16, | abuseThat was very intense...all of it really. She needs to learn to trust people and to think about their feelings. It can't always be about her and she's definitely not the only one who got hurt. Granted, Marco is being a complete asshole about this whole situation, but she's not making things any better. I think she should just talk to him, face to face about what's going on. She needs to tell him how she feels and why she does things the way she does and he should be honest to her as well, but things usually don't happen that way, so I'm just going to sit here and shake my head at the stupid things they do. I love it! |
| WriterGurl123 2008-07-03 ch 15, | abusePoor Leigh-how in the world do you pronounce it? I want to say Lay-ah but then I want to say Lee, but I'm not too sure. I get what she's saying about consistency with Marco, but at the same time, she's done this with so many other guys, it's only fair that she has to deal with this. Sure, it's completely wrong and it hurts, but she needs to know what it feels like, so that she won't be doing it. Anyways, the story is absolutely amazing, and I'm a new reader who's hooked, so keep it comin'! I love it! |
| dreamercrys 2008-07-02 ch 15, | abuseWell damn...boys are jerks... |
| dreamercrys 2008-07-02 ch 1, | abusegirls always want the bad boys... |
| HisFiestyBeauty 2008-07-01 ch 15, | abuseI am loving this story!! It rocks |
| Bloody Crayon 2008-07-01 ch 15, | abuseI'm glad Leigh is being strong and saying no to both Chase and Marco but she and Marco are meant to be! Please update soon. And thanks for the review! I was actually inspired by both the it girl and private! |
| killerB 2008-06-16 ch 14, | abuseI've been reading a few of your stories and am really enjoying them! Sorry I haven't reviewed every chapter, but I'm usually too eager to see what happens next. I'm especially enjoying Chloe; I like this one and Dawntill Academy a lot, too. Keep up the good work! |
| HisFiestyBeauty 2008-06-13 ch 14, | abuseI love this story ! I cant wait for more!! |
| Bloody Crayon 2008-06-01 ch 14, | abuseAhh! Marco! Why? Please update soon. I want to know what happens with Marco and Leigh! |
| White Isle 2008-05-30 ch 1, | abuseI'm mildly intrigued so far. It will be interesting to see how things pan out--including why you named the story the way you did. I'll try to read the rest of it soon. Thus far, you've given things 'the dignity of their name,' which adds to the realism. It does feel like a real high school; however I may add that the characters don't really interest me yet--they still remain in cookie-cutters to me. It's still early, and that may change. Also...I notice a lot of simple errors within the text of the story, which is rather distracting. This can easily be remedied by beta reading, or putting the chapter down for a few days and coming back to it. |
| Bloody Crayon 2008-05-29 ch 13, | abuseOhh! Yay! Great update. I'm glad that Marco and Leigh made up, although it seemed kind of sudden. It was funny that she wanted to go to boarding school. Please update soon. |
| crazeedaizee411 2008-05-29 ch 13, | abuseOkay... I don't hate Leigh now. She's much better than the last chapter. I'm glad things are getting fixed between her and Marco!! Great Chapter!! |
| crazeedaizee411 2008-05-28 ch 12, | abuseoh. Way to screw up Leigh... she's starting to really annoy me now. Please Update soon!! :D |