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| losing gracie girl 2008-04-07 ch 1,  | abusetrue. yours until the wind changes, gg |
| EyesEmphatic 2008-04-06 ch 1, | abuseI can relate to this, it's written really well, but I think it could have used a stronger ending, that seemed to just kind of trail off. Maybe it's the way I read it though. The rest of it as a whole was great though, well done :) |