Home Just In Communities Forums Beta Readers Dictionary Search Login Register Extras
Reviews For: weakness

losing gracie girl
2008-04-07
ch 1,
abusei really like this.
the last stanza has really good wording.

yours until the wind changes,
gg
Anarchist Poet
2008-04-06
ch 1,
abuseinteresting.

i suck at reviewing things but this is really good

(as is everything else i've read by you)
East-0f-Eden
2008-04-06
ch 1,
abuseYour last stanza is BRILLIANT! Infact I think it might be my favorite stanza of yours. I liked this poem bc it reminded me of myself and I don't know if that's good or bad.
Return to Top